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The Causal Principle by =clownscape:iconclownscape:



He had painted the picture of nothing but a solitary teardrop on a piece of black carbon paper. On the other side of the paper he had laid down the river.

Night bloomed in the river, that morning. Reflected onto the air above. Paintbrushed into a random breeze.

She woke up that morning into the dark, tear-strained. She knew at the primacy of her senses, that this wasn’t an eclipse. It was blindness. One of those denser forms of darkness where you can’t see anything even when you close your eyes. For it pours into your nervous system. She’d never see him again.

Standing there on the riverbank, he realized she’d never be able to comprehend his gift. Or understand it.

He tore off his tear.
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they came flying in the water

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Given 2008-09-01

The Causal Principle by *clownscape speaks volumes in under two hundred words. There is certainly something deeper stated here, but one may never truly know. (Featured by ^LadyLincoln)

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:icononewithdarkness:
Interesting, i can't help but note the curiosity that this conjures, or the quaint matter in which it is composed. odd how the smaller compilations give such a minute, irresistible flavor?

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:iconclownscape:
Short is sweet, as they say.

It's good to know that you liked it.

Smile.

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Lemme take you on a roller-coaster ride through some of the places I've known.

Places Don't Exist
:icononewithdarkness:
agreed and you're welcome. take care mate. :salute:

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put the government back in the people's hands! [link]
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Love is foolish when handled by fools, but caution blows it too the wind.
:iconfructisindia:
This is really beautiful.
Thank you.
:iconthesorrowfulvampress:
It's good.

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Sebastian: *smiles gently* That kid's brain... makes me feel a deep emotion that goes beyond anger...
:iconnasirmajor:
awesome feeling caught on paper
:iconkykel:
It's poetic. Even if it's not a poem it still have that beauty of poetry to it. Amazing job. I really like this.

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Live by the pen and pencil and you live free.
:iconiscariot-priest:
This is even more cryptic than your usual stuff. Personally I prefer your older pieces like Uncle and a river measured in time, but this is good too.

Congrats on the DD.

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“Now me lay down to sleep.
Mow da zeebas down like sheep.
Give dem to me nice and dead.
Me no happy ‘til me fed.”
-Bedtime prayer of crocs, Pearls Before Swine
My Faith in Humanity:327
:iconsimplyjessxx:
Its strange, but I really like it.

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i've got those rolled back eyes, but nothing's clouding my vision.
:iconclownscape:
Ahh. Sweet nostalgia.

Smile. :hug:

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Lemme take you on a roller-coaster ride through some of the places I've known.

Places Don't Exist

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