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I wrote my screams on a piece of paper. Distributed evenly on either sides. One of the sides would weigh more than the other.
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There's a cactus growing out of my head. It might outgrow me. None of my words would seem sharp enough afterward. I find the roots on my tongue. I'm thirsty. Pass on the bottle please. If it's not empty already. Sorry folks. I can't differentiate water from air. Drinking one is same as inhaling the other. So, pass on the bottle, if you haven't trapped vacuum in it. Excuse me sir, I've been foolish. Vacuum and mammoths are long extinct. Drinking anything might work.

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~K-Sajid Aug 27, 2008, 11:56:33 PM
You have so much going in so little space. Even your author's comment could be a piece in it's own right :lol:
I'm sorry your piece just left me lost for words and I feel really silly, with nothing to say =/
Vacuum and mammoths are long extinct. That's just beautiful. I'm really glad I'm watching you.

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~moon-bunnies Aug 28, 2008, 1:06:45 AM
It's not often you see a description longer than the piece itself.

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=clownscape Aug 28, 2008, 7:54:41 AM
Yes, space is perhaps, what this piece really deals with. I didn't have much space left to deal with this any more elaborately.

Thanks for reading this. And more into it.

Bhalo Theko.

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Lemme take you on a roller-coaster ride through some of the places I've known.

Places Don't Exist
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=clownscape Aug 28, 2008, 7:56:09 AM
:lmao:

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Lemme take you on a roller-coaster ride through some of the places I've known.

Places Don't Exist
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~K-Sajid Aug 28, 2008, 8:17:35 AM
Bhalo Theko :lol: I've never heard any Bengali in dA before. I'm glad.
Apni Bangla kotha bolte paren? Or just phrases? I'm guessing you're an Indian Bengali =D

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[link] my last.fm
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=clownscape Aug 28, 2008, 8:31:50 AM
Hmm. Ami Kolkatay thaki. Puropuri Bangali. Nirbhejal. ;)

Smile. :hug:

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Lemme take you on a roller-coaster ride through some of the places I've known.

Places Don't Exist
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~K-Sajid Aug 28, 2008, 8:51:18 AM
=D awesome! I love Kolkata. My mouth's watering just thinking about the street food there =p

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[link] my tumblr

[link] my last.fm
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~ejectionletter Aug 28, 2008, 5:27:52 PM
even distribution is a lie anyway. one side always weighs more than the other.
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=clownscape Aug 28, 2008, 6:02:55 PM
:nod:

Smile. :hug:

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Lemme take you on a roller-coaster ride through some of the places I've known.

Places Don't Exist
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